LETTER (NEW SCHOOL)

 LETTER (NEW SCHOOL)





No 12 Jalan Bukit Kempas ,

                                                                                                           4/15 Taman Bukit Kempas,

                                                                                                           81200 Johor Bahru Johor.

                                                                                                           22 JANUARY 2021

Dear Diana,

Hi ! How are you ? I hope you in the pink of health. I am still having online classes. Yes it is wonderful to see all friends after a long time. Good to know that you have started class too and glad to hear that your school has provided many wonderful facilities. I would really like to hear about all the wonderful facilities in your school. Do you have computers in your classroom ?

Wow! That’s great recycled items.You can bring about motivation in the classroom trough these positive writings and thoughts.

I think you should add some inspirational quotes that might motivate you and those who are going to see your desk. Moreover, you can put pictures of inspirational person such as Neelofa, the famous woman entrepreneur. She is very inspiring and I wish to be like her someday soon. For example, you can put motivational quotes for entrepreneur such as “Don’t limit yourself. Many people limit themselves to what they think they can do. You can go as far as your mind lets you. What you believe, remember you can achieve.”- Mary Kay Ash .

Great to know that your school has held the sports day. I am happy to hear that. I will surely like your video, share with my friends and support you to the fullest.

Oh, Before I forget, our class teacher is in good shape and she is always cheerful when teaching us. We really had fun studying with her. But unfortunately, she will move to another school due to a promotion soon. I felt a little sad about it but at the same time, I am really proud of her. Let us together wish her success in her new school.

Bye,

                                                                                                                                       Evelyn

Comments

  1. Para 2: spelling through
    Check para 3: you need 2 ideas. Do you have 2 ideas? The quote is very inspiring.
    Clear and some interesting details with connectors. Keep it up.
    C=18, L-20

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